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Larry's Adventure II Ch. 15Chapter 15: Days of Our ExcessLarry's Adventure II Ch. 15 by PT-Piranha
Purple and Co. got to the outside of Shadow Noah Island and finally defeated Dark Red Bones. Now they’re on the Excess Express on their way to Bill Gates’s house to defeat him. How did the train get to Toad Town? Who is Bill Gates’s minion? Why does he refer to himself in the third person? I still don’t care!
Here’s the cabin layout:
1. Zip Toad (real)
2. Remy Ratooey (red Ratooey in shades)
3. Heff T. (still onboard)
4. Goldbob’s Family
5. Purple and Co.
6. Dr. Shroob
7. A Mudkip
P.T.: How long will this take?
Purple: The brochure about Bill Gates’s house says six days by train.
P.T.: I’m going to the Train Hospital to see about this arm.
Fin: I’m gonna go pickpocket.
Luigi: I’m gonna see if the store is selling my book.
P.T., Fin, and Luigi leave.
Yux: I hate this train so I’m gonna see if I can sleep for six days.
Rufus: I’m gonna watch the
Larry's Adventure II Ch. 14Chapter 14: Battle of Shadow Noah IslandLarry's Adventure II Ch. 14 by PT-Piranha
Our heroes defeated the mighty Metal Gizmo SHARK and then the second member of the Bowling Team of Doom, Grubba. The fight was hard but they did it. But their troubles weren’t over yet as they still had to escape. And now they’re stranded on the outside of the island with Dark Red Bones!
Dark Red Bones wastes no time and starts breathing fire at the heroes! They run away, and shockingly the ice doesn’t melt. Maybe that’s because it’s a disguise and not real ice. Dark Red Bones starts running after the heroes and spitting fireballs at them!
P.T.: WHY?! WHY DO YOU HATE US SO?!
Dark Red Bones: DIE!
Dark Red Bones takes his arm off and throws it at Fin, and then it grabs him and attaches to the ground, tripping Fin. Dark Red Bones then ground pounds on him repeatedly. P.T. leaps over and knocks Dark Red Bones away with his Golden Hammer. But then Dark Red Bones leaps back, takes the hammer, and knocks P.T. into t
Larry's Adventure II Ch. 13Chapter 13: Metal Gizmo SolidLarry's Adventure II Ch. 13 by PT-Piranha
In a deleted scene, our heroes were captured and then imprisoned on Shadow Noah Island. They tried to escape before being used to power the Metal Gizmo, but ran into a villain in league with the Ancient Minister: Grubba. And they also learned of the Bowling Team of Doom, and that both the Minister and Grubba were members! Can the heroes escape and save Toad Town in time?
Our heroes are still standing before Grubba. Or vice versa.
Purple: So what are you gonna do?
Grubba: I’m gonna kill ya! But I got a date with a nice chickadee in a few, and I don’t wanna be all sweaty, so the Metal Gizmo will give you yer dirt nap! Oh an’ by the by, revenge for the Ancient Minister is the reason we caught you… Other than powerin’ mah machine.
Grubba presses a button, and the giant, bronze-ish, robot Rex with the shining yellow eyes bursts through the wall.
Grubba: Meet, Metal Gizmo! Or specifically, Metal Gizmo SHARK!
The Metal Gizmo S
Larry's Adventure II Ch. 12Chapter 12: Shadow Noah IslandLarry's Adventure II Ch. 12 by PT-Piranha
The heroes and Yux defeated Dark Fiery Dino Piranha and made many Meet The Spartans references as they defeated the Shroobs again. But the Shroobs weren’t completely done for, as they’re on their way back to recapture Toad Town. Will they get their town and eat it too? Wait, why would they eat a town…?
Suddenly, Purple wakes up in a metal room.
Purple: What’s going on?
Rufus: Oh, a meteor knocked us out but then it turned out to be a ship full of people looking for people to throw in this prison for no real reason. The author thought he’d save time and skip to us being held in here.
Rufus: Shut up, Yux.
Purple: Where are we?
Rufus: Someone said the name, “Shadow Noah Island”.
Purple: Are we all separated like in Chapter 9?
Luigi: No, we’re all here, unfortunately.
A Koopatrol walks by the cell.
Purple: What is this place?
Koopatrol: I can’t tell you that! I can only tell you my name,
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